Sample Heat Map Analysis
Sarah Anderson - Product Manager Resume.pdf
High Attention (80%+)
Medium (50-80%)
Low (20-50%)
Often Missed (<20%)
Problems Found
Content Score: 19/100. This resume has 6 weak verbs vs only 1 strong verb, and 0 bullets with metrics out of 16.
- Objective Statement: Gets 81% attention but provides zero value — replace with quantified summary
- No Metrics: 0 out of 16 bullets have numbers. "Significant adoption" = vague
- Weak Verbs: "Responsible for", "Assisted", "Participated" — 6 weak vs 1 strong
- Skills at Bottom: 44% attention — move key skills to top third
How to Fix (Example Rewrites)
- Before: "Responsible for managing the product roadmap and working with cross-functional teams"
After: "Drove product roadmap for 3 product lines, coordinating 12-person cross-functional team" - Before: "Launched mobile app that achieved significant user adoption"
After: "Launched mobile app to 500K downloads in 90 days, 4.7★ App Store rating" - Before: "Improved user retention through various feature enhancements"
After: "Increased 30-day retention 28% through A/B testing program (40+ experiments)"